I wonder if anyone in the class can add a comment and tell the story so mums and dads can follow what is happening in the film. Who's going to write the opening??
What fun we have in year 4! Here are the children acting out the story they worked on in literacy today.
I wonder if anyone in the class can add a comment and tell the story so mums and dads can follow what is happening in the film. Who's going to write the opening??
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Luke
1/5/2015 11:58:01 am
The Savana hadn't rained for ages and all fruit had gone
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Katelyn
5/5/2015 08:42:23 am
I really enjoyed doing shows about the story of the Savana. When the animals had no fruit to eat and they had to send the lion Simba to find the name of the magic fruit tree. The lion found the name awongalema but he fell into a deep, vast hole. I hope to learn about more fun stories like this.
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Mrs Hayter
6/5/2015 12:10:13 pm
Well done Katelyn. Hopefully you'll enjoy writing your own version of this story as much as you enjoyed hearing this one.
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Thomas
5/5/2015 09:12:11 am
It had not rained for a long time on the savannah and all the animals needed food.
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Lauren B
5/5/2015 11:02:06 am
The animals had no fruit to eat so they sent Simba the lion to go to the mountain of sprits eventually they got what they wanted.
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Sam T
5/5/2015 12:23:09 pm
The animals wanted food because they were starving.The food was gone,so they went to talk to the spirits.My favorite part of this lesson was drawing the pictures.
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Alphonsine
6/5/2015 08:52:03 am
I thought that the actors were really good at showing what was going on in the story.
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It didn't rain in the Savannah for a long time, and the animals needed the mountain of spirits to make the magic tree produce mouldy fruits to turn into ripe fruits.First the animals trusted Simba the lion to get the name of the mountain of spirits, hurriedly he sprinted to the mountain of spirits, and when he arrived he bellowed mountain of spirits talk to me!. What's the name of the magic tree?. Within a second the mountain of spirits replied and shouted AWONGALIMA!!! A moment later the lion swiftly sprinted back to his jungle. Unfortunately he was going so quick he fell into a ants nest... After he flicked the last ant of his body, he had forget the name of the magic tree.When he got home the animals asked him what's the name of the magic tree?I forget Simba said anxiously.
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Mrs Hayter
6/5/2015 12:08:02 pm
This is a great retelling of the story Harvey, well done.
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Ethan P-L
6/5/2015 12:29:35 pm
I thought this group was excellent because they worked on the task superbly. I think my group can do better but good work Harvey and group.
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Georgia
7/5/2015 12:43:53 am
The animanls in Savannah had no food or water and so they needed to find a way to get some, they went to the spirits to do this. They went one at a time and each had to overcome obstacles, but in the end it all worked out for them. I enjoyed this story.
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Hannah
7/5/2015 04:40:10 am
The story is about a few animals wh have no food. So they sent some of the animals to find the name of the magic tree. But the animals were to fast so they forgotten the name of the magic tree.So they sent the turtle who found the name of the magic tree and they sat round the tree eating fruit.
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Ruby
7/5/2015 09:14:35 am
We were all different characters of the story. I was the cheetah, I was running as fast as I could to get to the mountain. I was trying to get to the acacia tree to get some food. I enjoyed the story and acting.
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Lauren B
9/5/2015 02:43:27 am
I really enjoyed performing to the class because we all did a fantastic job.
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